提分指南 l 托福写作最全秘籍 助你在考试中过关斩将

很多人说托福写作是四个单项里面套路最深的。也就是说，写作其实是可以通过短时间的突击准备得到大幅度提升的一项。

既然如此，那么今天小K就来为大家介绍一下托福写作的备考的方法和思路。今天的分享将分为综合写作和独立写作两个部分。

综合写作

综合写作实质上就是“一篇阅读+一段听力+总结”。

开头给你3分钟看下给出的阅读材料，之后听一篇听力，最后总结下听力和阅读都说了什么，以及它们之间的逻辑关系是什么。

以下是综合写作的笔记图，整张草稿纸分成两半，左半部分是reading部分，右半部分是listening部分。

3分钟阅读开始后，这三分钟里我们要做的事情就是尽可能快的从这三百个字左右的文章里提炼出各部分的核心内容。

主要要记的内容包括main idea、supporting idea，以及evidence。

一般第一段我们得出了reading的main idea，算是文章主旨。然后从接下来的三段中我们会得到三个supporting idea去支持main idea，而针对每个supporting idea我们又会有几个或多个evidence去支持它。

listening是个逻辑性，针对性很高的东西，reading怎么证明它自己的supporting idea是对的，listening就针对它提出的supporting idea以及支持这些supporting idea的evidence一个一个地反驳，反驳后还要自己另外加上一些evidence来支持反驳的正确性。

模板

段一：The reading passage states that ... , whereas the listening believes that...

段二：To begin with, the reading insists that ... The speaker, however, argues that...

段三：Furthermore, the author of the reading claims... In contrast, the professor suggests that...

段四：Finally, the writer displays that... On the contrary, the lecturer indicates that...

独立写作

独立写作的结构大致如下：

第一段+让步段+两个转折段+结尾，基本就是A比B好，B有一个好处，可是A有两个好处，A的好处点更多，或是A的好处更重大，所以A好，然后总结一下。

题型：隐藏绝对词类

话题：社会类

分析：隐藏绝对词类的题目暗含的意思是一类人都应该做某事儿。我们既可以完全同意这个事儿的2-3个好处，也可以完全不同意找到其2-3个比较好展开而且不重复的坏处，毕竟一个事儿很难适合所有人，只要我们找到一个反例，实际上就可以很好地反驳这个题目。

思路一：一边倒同意

1.由于很多大城市的生活成本高到了前所未有程度，现在的年轻人普遍面临着双重压力，因此没有时间和精力来帮忙社区

First and foremost, with the living costs in most of megalopolises hitting all time high, a large proportion of young urban residents today are exposed to scissor-style pressure, as a result of which rare will be the spare time that is available for making contributions to improving the community. For relevant examples we only need to turn to the experience of my elder brother, a newly graduated college student, majoring in software engineering, working in a leading software company as a development engineer.

2.随着社交网络的出现以及生活节奏的加快，现在的年轻人跟邻居熟识的机会越来越少，自然也就不愿意去参与社区的改善。

On the top of that, there is no point for the young people working in metropolises to help their neighbors if the chance of getting acquainted with them seems quit slim, thanks mainly to the advent of social network applications and also to the increasingly rapid pace of modern life. My elder brother's experience can be cited here again to shed the light on this point.

Money is the most important aspect in a job.

Material reward is not the only factor to consider while choosing a job, but it is the most appealing, particularly for those seasoned employees, thanks to the ever-increasing living cost in the overwhelming majority of metropolises, to the scissor-style pressure they are exposed to from supporting their aging parents as well as raising children, and above all, to their strong desire of receiving salaries in a reasonable proportion to their years of strenuous work.

思路二：具体情况具体分析

对于条件比较差的年轻人来说，他们很难找到足够的时间来帮助改善社区因为他们没有选择只能不遗余力的赚更多的钱，甚至以牺牲自己的身体健康为代价。

With regard to young people in poor and backward areas, hardly could they have enough time to make contributions to the improvement of their communities on account of the fact that they have no options but to pull out all their stops to earn more money even at the cost their health. There are myriads of examples in our lives, one of which is my elder brother, a high school graduate, working as a waiter in a restaurant in Beijing.

然而，对于那些来自经济比较发达地区的年轻人来说，很容易想象他们中绝大部分人愿意在社区改善中扮演非常积极的角色。首先，他们更强烈的意识到和谐社区的必要性；其次，不断提高的生活水平使得他们不必成为最基础的需求担心，主要问题或许集中在通过改善社区获得新的成就感。

However, when it comes to the youth in economically advanced/vibrant areas, it takes little imagination to think that a majority of them are willing to play an active role in bettering their neighborhoods.

Granted, helping the community| Voluntary work is not the only factor to consider in their spare time, but it is the most appealing, particularly for those young people from affluent families, thanks mainly to the strong desire to escape the ennui of home and to find identity, and also to the sense of self-fulfillment gained in such kind of activities.

It is much easier for the parents to raise children now than fifty years ago.

思路三：一边倒不同意

现在的父母多忙啊，工作压力多大啊，没时间管孩子

First of all, the fact that an overwhelming majority of parents today have no option but to work overtime frequently is hardly a surprise which can be largely attributed to the increasingly fierce competition in the job market, as a result of which, they find it increasingly hard for them to spare ample time for their children.

题型： 今昔对比类

话题： 商业类

思路： 一边倒但是从公司和个人两个角度进行分析

First of all, there is no denying that fewer and fewer companies would like to allure their customers through deceptive ads since the benefits of such kind of market activities pales into insignificance when set against their huge negative impact.

Furthermore, at the inpidual level, with the advent of popularity of the internet, especially the introduction of all kinds of applications, an increasing number of consumers have come to the rude awakening that most of ads are at best informative and at worst misleading.

让步段

1.不应该做A，因为会影响B

2.如果坚持做A而不顾B的话，后果会很严重

3.具体说明严重的后果是什么

4.得出结论，应该做B/不应该做A

转折段

1.做A的好处

2. 背景铺垫：

1）具体行为

2）故事结局

3）分析故事——点题

4）举例论证－－故事

5）背景介绍（人物|时间|地点|面对问题）

6）具体行为（注意对比）

7）最终结果

8）解读故事（故事解读时用虚拟语气非常重要）

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